Friday, February 18, 2011

Just Like That....


She was 15 and he was fourteen………Tall, dashing newly growing moustache looks which were flawless……..she immediately fell for him. It was love at first sight….she was a dusky beauty all features just intact and can kill anyone for that matter. He proposed her one day in a very filmy way…and she just nodded her head….So the fire now at both sides..It was a teenage love….but does love look at the age it begins with?? Creams and peaches, movies and ice-creams, noodles and parties were the only things sought after….Studies what the hell it was???? All gone into oblivion…….and suddenly one day he walked away with another girl………….just like that as they say……She was heart-broken……..because she knew nothing beyond him….It was him with open and closed eyes….they say love just happens once and and the first love of her life…..Could it be more bitter?????

Best part of Life is it  moves on……it moved her… it made her harsher and stronger…..and again she came across a guy who fell for her at first sight…she thought how can I love him……my mind is still stuck with my first love….but he insisted and persisted until she bowed down….ok she thought ….being in the same profession it would be fine marrying him….we would have a good future…all was going well….they studied together…planned their future…...and suddenly one day he flew away to Singapore……just like that…..

To err is human……..she knew….but now it was twice….shattered though….gathered herself  gracefully and promised herself never trust a man now. They are perverted creeps. Cowards !! can’t even  stand up to their words…But it’s a man’s world…how long she could stay away from them…This time a Marriage Proposal….he was a wealthy business tycoon with chain of wine shops. She said no I want to be a Spinster……can’t trust these men now mom……..Mom said “all men are not the same….look at ur dad…..Isn’t he a gentleman?....Oh yeah  he has been the ideal man have watched him while I grew up..but aren’t there exceptions Mom ?……this generation doesn’t have dad kinda men….Mom explained: God gave them strong bodies darling, but they are weak at heart……they are the weaker species….we are more stronger……so God gives us all the troubles….because he knows men they can’t handle all this….we can so all tests in our fold……”.She listened to mom as she used to listened to her fairy tales when she was small….Ok fine she said…..I’ll marry him…and they got married….he was a very good human being with very bad habits……..Boozed and beat her were the worst of them…..As if this was not enough…..Oh God she said…..”can u create atleast one man with a healthy bone marrow and a decent heart……..why don’t they borrow some from women…?and one fine morning he left her for hell …just like that…

Can men be ever trusted  she thought??………just like that!!!




3 comments:

  1. Awesome! Loved every bit of it...keep it up!

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  2. Congrats..very good writting. for first time must say very well written :-)
    Warning: Some men/boys might b a bit apprehensive about this..but u've d courage as this can be interpreted as semi-fictional! keep it up..

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  3. Darling, I do write columns for newspapers.....so not new for me....but yeah...blogging is new...thanks for encouraging... it is complete fiction....just like that... :)

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